Two snipers who've become shells of their former selves, wander into the sinister recesses of their inner darkness. A good quality with the camera and a handful of the shots,however i felt the voice acting was a little monotone,the two snipers we abit hard to tell apart from each other at the start and it does feel like something is missing. i know it's hard to do a story in a short film but know some of the characters motives would of been nice, the sniper sound effect was a bit ehh and the overall sound wasn't very good but doesn't really take much away from the experience in total, the face expressions at the very end could've been done a lot better to add weight to the act about to happen, good camera shots; a impressive short film. 8/10 would like to see more in the future. I just finished watching this on YouTube today. I have some good and things that can be worked on in the future in case you make more, which you should! Not a bad film it shows that you put a lot of effort into it which I respect. Although, being the movie reviewer that I am, I do have some flaws. The story is lacking, I personally did not feel for any characters or relate to them but it is well filmed, good cinematography, great set, and good directing. Just some constructive criticism but good job for your directorial debut. Looking forward to seeing your next film. Maybe one day we could do a collaboration video -Bailey Stimpson
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